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Hell

A friend on Facebook shared this story with me a few months ago - thank you FB Friend! I can't remember who twigged me on to this, so please speak your peace, if you see this. It's one of those stories that kind of sticks with you and may be in your final thoughts before you die. I'm copying the very short narrative here on the Cliffs, but all credit goes to MeanPete, and I'm linking back to his original post. Click this breathtaking painting by Polish artist, Zdzisław Beksiński to be taken to Hell's origins.  Scroll down to read.


HELL

There was no pearly gate.
The only reason I knew I was in a cave was because I had just passed the entrance. The rock wall rose behind me with no ceiling in sight.
I knew this was it, this was what religion talked about, what man feared .. I had just entered the gate to hell.
I felt the presence of the cave as if it was a living, breathing creature. The stench of rotten flesh overwhelmed me.
Then there was the voice, it came from inside and all around.
"Welcome"
"Who are you?", I asked, trying to keep my composure.
"You know", the thing answered.
I did know.
"You are the devil", I stuttered, quickly losing my composure. "Why me? I've lived as good as I could".
The silence took over the space as my words died out. It seemed like an hour went by before the response came.
"What did you expect?"
The voice was penetrating but patient.
"I don't know .. I never believed any of this", I uttered "Is that why I am here?"
Silence.
I continued: "They say the greatest trick you ever pulled was convincing the world you don't exist"
"No, the greatest trick I ever pulled was convincing the world that there is an alternative"
"There is no God?" I shivered.
The cave trembled with the words: "I am God"

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It was me!
_bows_ That was me, my dear! Mind you, I have no idea who wrote it. Yes, it has serious stayed with me as well. I only hope I can one day make such an impact with so few lines! o.O O_O
Re: It was me!
Do'h! Sorry, I didn't read your entire post! (i_iz_dum) The author is MeanPete?! Thanks for letting us know!
Re: It was me!
Yeah, MeanPete has a mean way with words. And thank you for jogging my memory that is was you who shared it. Thanks again for that. Now, allow me to creep you out even more than the story alone. If you combine religion with science, in particular String Theory, that MeanPete ever wrote this means that this is reality in some universe or more than one, perhaps even our own.

Sweet dreams.